I think your game feels unique and interesting. You successfully achieved the retro aesthetic and I think your voice acting was a nice addition despite your self-criticism.
However, while the story mode initially seemed to have a decent length, I felt like it was missing some key aspects after the last customer. Although it was good, I believe it could be even better with more interaction and elaborative context.
I was also curious about your plans for the future. If this is your first game, I apologize for being a bit harsh in my review, but I see a lot of potential in you and I wish you all the best in accomplishing your goals.
Thank you for your feedback, it's not harsh at all!
Certainly there is room for the ending to be more substantial. I would be interested in elaborating upon it if I decide to give the game another pass, for which ideas are always welcome.
I'm currently developing ideas for future games. I'm hoping to make something relatively small and specific, where the eroticism is achieved through the gameplay, not exclusively as a reward for it.
Anyways I've been pondering about making NSFW games, but I'm skeptical and paranoid about pursuing this endeavor, espcialy due to my lack of experience in game development and art skills outside of what I've done SFW.
That is a really interesting read and sums up my thoughts really well. I'm intending to write up some of my own thoughts too, specifically on the power of subtlety in pornographic games.
I hope you try your hand at making games! There are really no risks that I can think of.
Making the sort of thing you really want to see is a great motivator, and every project builds your expertise. 'Failing' a project is not really a problem, you'll have learned something along the way.
I'm keen to share experiences or give pointers if you like!
Speaking of reaction time, I'm sorry for this late reply as I was going to reply back to "KinkyKikker" as soon as I saw the email notification, but in all honesty, I was so reluctant to reply back because I couldn't conjure up how I feel with myself, rather it be wanting to create NSFW/other types of content, when it comes to myself I tend to stumble in circles either rambling or not being able to speak up or even worse not being able to do something I wanted to do or could've done.
I'm going to attempt to refrain from being as repetitive as I can, & simply say this-
With all cliches or such set aside, I have the need/want to create things but I keep holding myself back due to many things hindering me from being/wanting to be successful, I will admit the fact that I blame myself for all the mistakes I've done & made, which placed me into limbo many years ago but yet I grew very lazy in the recent past year or so, I don't mean to vent here or even to y'all, I'm just honestly lost within my ways, that is my main point, I still want to try but I just can't seem to progress under a fake happy facade I used for the past few years now, I understand that I'm an adult(21yrs) & should be able to be independent, but my excuse is I never had the proper guidance-
I will stop right there as I believe I said enough...
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wow I didn't know they made more games for the virtual boy, no but in all seriousness this is a great game
I think your game feels unique and interesting. You successfully achieved the retro aesthetic and I think your voice acting was a nice addition despite your self-criticism.
However, while the story mode initially seemed to have a decent length, I felt like it was missing some key aspects after the last customer. Although it was good, I believe it could be even better with more interaction and elaborative context.
I was also curious about your plans for the future. If this is your first game, I apologize for being a bit harsh in my review, but I see a lot of potential in you and I wish you all the best in accomplishing your goals.
Thank you for your feedback, it's not harsh at all!
Certainly there is room for the ending to be more substantial. I would be interested in elaborating upon it if I decide to give the game another pass, for which ideas are always welcome.
I'm currently developing ideas for future games. I'm hoping to make something relatively small and specific, where the eroticism is achieved through the gameplay, not exclusively as a reward for it.
Np, yw.
Take your time, and do what you can & want to do.
Glad to hear that, I'm definitely interested in seeing what your future projects will bring.
I quite agree with your approach (also I found something that you might also agree with: https://desiran.gay/blog/post?id=2).
Anyways I've been pondering about making NSFW games, but I'm skeptical and paranoid about pursuing this endeavor, espcialy due to my lack of experience in game development and art skills outside of what I've done SFW.
That is a really interesting read and sums up my thoughts really well. I'm intending to write up some of my own thoughts too, specifically on the power of subtlety in pornographic games.
I hope you try your hand at making games! There are really no risks that I can think of.
Making the sort of thing you really want to see is a great motivator, and every project builds your expertise. 'Failing' a project is not really a problem, you'll have learned something along the way.
I'm keen to share experiences or give pointers if you like!
on god?
ur game was p neat, i have the reaction time of a sloth so i enjoyed the challenge haha
i fully agree with KK tho, absolutely go for it if you have an idea for a game
Desiran, nice to see you here!
Speaking of reaction time, I'm sorry for this late reply as I was going to reply back to "KinkyKikker" as soon as I saw the email notification, but in all honesty, I was so reluctant to reply back because I couldn't conjure up how I feel with myself, rather it be wanting to create NSFW/other types of content, when it comes to myself I tend to stumble in circles either rambling or not being able to speak up or even worse not being able to do something I wanted to do or could've done.
I'm going to attempt to refrain from being as repetitive as I can, & simply say this-
With all cliches or such set aside, I have the need/want to create things but I keep holding myself back due to many things hindering me from being/wanting to be successful, I will admit the fact that I blame myself for all the mistakes I've done & made, which placed me into limbo many years ago but yet I grew very lazy in the recent past year or so, I don't mean to vent here or even to y'all, I'm just honestly lost within my ways, that is my main point, I still want to try but I just can't seem to progress under a fake happy facade I used for the past few years now, I understand that I'm an adult(21yrs) & should be able to be independent, but my excuse is I never had the proper guidance-
I will stop right there as I believe I said enough...